okey, i think its good game, but u should definetly change Max art style. U can make a little corrections, like in some scenes his eyebrows just disappear and his hoodie looking really bad and maybe u should try different hair color. I think pink would look better, because of contrast with this blue hair girl. Or maybe just fully change his character look. I would like to see short dark skinned boy with black hair and two cute tails. With green, red or purple eyes and sharp teeth. But its just only my dream trap boy. U can do whatever u want.
I think plot is fine. Sleeping with Max is really good idea, but i think u should make him more agressive, like he (Max) would tease mc in bath or smth. And maybe try to make an avatar for mc too? Like u can give him feminine look, but in the future he can change his clothes. For exampe, if he choose Max, Max would buy for him girl`s clothes and if he choose blue hair girl, then she would buy to him boy`s clothes or mc can chose any clothes that he likes.
And i think blue hair girl is really boring, to be honest, that`s why i even didnt remember her name. Her look is fine, but her character is just any typical vanila character, that u can imagine. It would be more interesting if she is a bitch who is pretending vanilla and she was the one who set Max up and Max really apologized infront of her. But i think most likely u really did it, because there were some hints that she is a bitch, but she still is kinda boring. Maybe try to add more of her thoughts, where she is a bitch. Like she say something nice to u, but at the exact moment she think something like "This peasant would definetly become my puppet" or "Oh, he has nice ass. Want to smack it".
But its only my thoughts, u can do whatever u want. I just suggest what i would like to see. Sorry for my shit English, i am not native speaker, but i hope u understand smth from this. I hope u will continue to update this game!
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okey, i think its good game, but u should definetly change Max art style. U can make a little corrections, like in some scenes his eyebrows just disappear and his hoodie looking really bad and maybe u should try different hair color. I think pink would look better, because of contrast with this blue hair girl. Or maybe just fully change his character look. I would like to see short dark skinned boy with black hair and two cute tails. With green, red or purple eyes and sharp teeth. But its just only my dream trap boy. U can do whatever u want.
I think plot is fine. Sleeping with Max is really good idea, but i think u should make him more agressive, like he (Max) would tease mc in bath or smth. And maybe try to make an avatar for mc too? Like u can give him feminine look, but in the future he can change his clothes. For exampe, if he choose Max, Max would buy for him girl`s clothes and if he choose blue hair girl, then she would buy to him boy`s clothes or mc can chose any clothes that he likes.
And i think blue hair girl is really boring, to be honest, that`s why i even didnt remember her name. Her look is fine, but her character is just any typical vanila character, that u can imagine. It would be more interesting if she is a bitch who is pretending vanilla and she was the one who set Max up and Max really apologized infront of her. But i think most likely u really did it, because there were some hints that she is a bitch, but she still is kinda boring. Maybe try to add more of her thoughts, where she is a bitch. Like she say something nice to u, but at the exact moment she think something like "This peasant would definetly become my puppet" or "Oh, he has nice ass. Want to smack it".
But its only my thoughts, u can do whatever u want. I just suggest what i would like to see. Sorry for my shit English, i am not native speaker, but i hope u understand smth from this. I hope u will continue to update this game!